My argumentative paragraph

Plastic surgeries

If you are unpleased with your physical appearience, then you should have a plastic surgery. One possible reason could be that if you want to look better, a plastic surgery could be the best choice for you. When you change your look for better you can win self-esteam and be more confident, and the best result will be that you will have more opportunities to get a relationship with someone you want. According with investigations most of the plastic surgeries that are camed out suceed. In contrast, a few people don´t agree with cosmetic/plastic surgeries because they think that you have to accept yourself in the way you are, because you were created as good wanted, so they may say that it goes against religion. But as we know ther are some cases that it is very necessary to have a plastic surgery, for example with health problems, or for some people it could help them to get married easier, another case could be for being accepted by society and avoid discrimations. In my own opinion I think that a plastic surgery is a good choice if it is necessary.